Very nice prologue, jOjO covered the capitalization errors I noticed. I also wouldn't worry about the prologue being short, its a solid introduction to the basics of what the story is (hopefully) going to be about. I dug the Gods and Goddesses, with Mahayeren (sp?) being my favorite, understandably there wasn't much on Rafael and Isobel so I don't have much of an opinion on them, but I like Isobel so far being the know-it-all. I can't wait for more (jk I'm patiently waiting, I know how long it takes to code and write).
Thank you very much for understanding the writing time (as for the codes, i wrote many of them yesterday for the customization of the MC) Haha, it is very cool to know who is your favorite God! Rafael and Isobel were thrown into chaos but with the passage of the first chapter they will be better known.. I hope to be able to finish at least 1/3 of the chapter in the next few days but it will depend on how satisfied i am with my writing. In any case, feel free to take any questions.
(Any errors i can find will be corrected in the next update) Thank you very much for your comment! :)
The plot seems so interesting, and can't wait for the new chapters. I noticed some capitalization errors for the letter "i" in the writing, you might wanna check that out. Will we get to meet the gods in later chapters? ( ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡°)
Ahh I'm glad you found it interesting! I'm already starting to work on chapter one! Anyway, thanks for informing me about problems with "i" english is not my first language so any advice is welcome! (I'll fix the mistakes later) Oh the gods will certainly be seen in the next chapter ... and maybe you can talk to a particular God ...
Whatever you want to add or know, I'm on tumblr available: @awakening-of-the-gods-tco
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is this dropped? :(
Nop :) I'm getting back to work on the project! but I don't have a date for a new update yet. Sorry.
thats okay! im happy that you’re working on it and i can wait since i love the game ^w^
Very nice prologue, jOjO covered the capitalization errors I noticed. I also wouldn't worry about the prologue being short, its a solid introduction to the basics of what the story is (hopefully) going to be about. I dug the Gods and Goddesses, with Mahayeren (sp?) being my favorite, understandably there wasn't much on Rafael and Isobel so I don't have much of an opinion on them, but I like Isobel so far being the know-it-all. I can't wait for more (jk I'm patiently waiting, I know how long it takes to code and write).
Thank you very much for understanding the writing time (as for the codes, i wrote many of them yesterday for the customization of the MC) Haha, it is very cool to know who is your favorite God! Rafael and Isobel were thrown into chaos but with the passage of the first chapter they will be better known.. I hope to be able to finish at least 1/3 of the chapter in the next few days but it will depend on how satisfied i am with my writing. In any case, feel free to take any questions.
(Any errors i can find will be corrected in the next update) Thank you very much for your comment! :)
The plot seems so interesting, and can't wait for the new chapters. I noticed some capitalization errors for the letter "i" in the writing, you might wanna check that out. Will we get to meet the gods in later chapters? ( ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡°)
Ahh I'm glad you found it interesting! I'm already starting to work on chapter one! Anyway, thanks for informing me about problems with "i" english is not my first language so any advice is welcome! (I'll fix the mistakes later) Oh the gods will certainly be seen in the next chapter ... and maybe you can talk to a particular God ...
Whatever you want to add or know, I'm on tumblr available: @awakening-of-the-gods-tco
Ooooo so far so good. Im already in love with it.
I'm so happy that you're enjoying it. Thank you so much :)